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by carlosolaizola • Uploaded: May. 08 '07
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Description: This logo has been designed for lounge bar

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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degro said on May. 08 '07

that's a nice, eyecatching mark. but it's not balanced at all: the mark is too bold and the type too small, thin, and most importantly, weak. it's gotta be strong but still sleek and sexy, as it's there for a lounge bar. my opinion :).
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kosta said on May. 08 '07

yep, definitely use a lighter stroke for the mark, and make the text part stand out more

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