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Real or Fake client not set Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Mantra Vessels
- by Chanpion
- Work in progress. Waiting for signoff on this one for a small tinnie (fishing boat) manufacturing business. M and V incorporating the shape of a boat.
- Number of views: 3474
- Dated Submitted: May. 04 '07
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 14 '07
May. 04 '07
stiney51 said:Great mark, but the text is a bit off for me. I like the weight of the type, but font choice and the treatment takes away from the readability and design.
May. 04 '07
Thomas said:I love the mark, very clever and remarkable but so sorry to say that I don't like everything related to the type (font treatment, shapes, style...) It looks too "freebie" font, too cheap. Sorry to be so harsh but, for me, your excellent mark is ruined by this font... May be you could try to rebuild it (N from A, R from A, making the S symetric...)
May. 04 '07
bogdanv said:I have the same opinion: change the type or don`t connect the R with the L! Very nice mark and I think the background for this should be this blueish color! good work my friend!
May. 04 '07
nido said:hey chan you know how your my 32nd favourite designer on here, well now your my 31st;)
well done!
i love the mark bro & i kinda like the type too all though i know what the others are saying... but we're talking fractions bud... fractions!
May. 05 '07
djuice said:Awsome mark Chan, and I like the type treatment, the only thing that bothers me is the space between T&R and L&S
Jun. 10 '07
OcularInk said:How did I miss this one? I am in awe at the use of negative space. Simply brilliant!! And a well deserved feature on your showcase, buddy. Keep it up!!
Jun. 19 '07
firebrand said:Sheer perfection.
Jun. 19 '07
jonescreations said:i agree with everyone else. very cleverly done, i like it.
is that font kitchen police? it looks like it. you might suggest playing with that area a bit more if you are really nitpicky. :)
Jun. 19 '07
chanpion said:Thanks again for the compliments everyone! Yeah the font on the final version has been tweaked more so it didn't look as awkward. The font is Freya btw. Cheers.
Nov. 17 '07
neolux said:Strong mark. Simple. Will work well in B&W or embroidered on polo shirts or caps. You're client should be very happy. Great work! :)
May. 01 '08
wastedgeneration said:Good emblem. Maybe small from this.
Aug. 20 '08
Jan Ebbe Larsen said:Hey Champ! Brilliant, though it kinda reminds me of Tiger Woods' logo. Anyway ... inspiration has to come from somewhere, and you definetly made this one stand out. Nice work!
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May. 04 '07
ahab said:I like this...Strong, Clean & it makes sense. I like the font treatment too.
great job!