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swiss_cheese said on Mar. 10 '10

Updated with brighter colors. Any ideas on how to further improve this?

Type08 said on Mar. 10 '10

Sky seems a bit evening-like, maybe to try with a brighter blue?

swiss_cheese said on Mar. 10 '10

Made it a lighter blue. I like the idea of a sunset, but it's a redesign and the old version has no sunshine either.

vintage_chic said on Mar. 10 '10

I like it. The mark almost has that kind of "lino print" feel to it :)

birofunk said on Mar. 11 '10

beautifully executed!

Petro said on Mar. 11 '10

I agree wiht Type08. Maybe more brighter blue in the sky. I think it needs to give more tonal difference between water and sky, more contrast.

nitish.b said on Mar. 11 '10

i like the sky the way it is...but the sun looks a lil off..imo..but i dig this guy..like wr it is goin

swiss_cheese said on Mar. 11 '10

@vintage_chick, birofunk: Thanks!
@Petro: I already brightened the sky. I'll try some more.
@nitish: Yeah, I didn't expect it to go to the frontpage, I'm still tweaking

milou said on Mar. 11 '10

nice illu here.

swiss_cheese said on Mar. 12 '10

This is not going to be used so I put it on Brandstack.

beachbabyk said on Apr. 08 '10

I would have the sun cut off a bit by the outer circle, just to tone down the effect of the yellow dot.

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