I agree with most of the comments...very nice look and feel, but the readability is a bit off. Maybe if you allowed for a break in the left side of the cross of the 't' (where it meets the top swooshy curl thing) and then didn't let the curl that comes into the 'n' and protrude through the left side of the vertical stroke, that might help...it'd keep the eye from telling the brain that the letter stops where the curl hits it.
I agree that the legibility of the name is a bid difficult, so instead of the nonsense I tried to post explaining some possible ideas to fix that, here's a visual:
http://www.dottedicreative.com/rocketon.jpg
Basically, I separated the crossbar of the 't' from the top-right swoosh, then straightened the left side of the right vertical stroke of the 'n' where it meets the curl to help imply the stroke is meant to go all the way to the baseline. May or may not help...just thought I'd try. Nice mark, nonetheless.
^ excuse the multiple postings of the same stuff...can't find a delete or edit button to fix it.
Jaggu said on
May. 28 '10
like it alot but i read Rockeron
charmy said on
May. 30 '10
verygood verynice!!
JF said on
May. 30 '10
Agreed with everyone -- looks like "RockeRon" to me as well.
RossSokolovski said on
Jun. 01 '10
great type!
VYshouldhavewon said on
Jun. 06 '10
Beautiful, I love the flourishes at the corners. I also read Rockeron, I could also see it saying "Rockeroh". I almost don't care, it's a very nice looking mark.
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dotted i said on May. 27 '10
dotted i said on May. 27 '10
http://www.dottedicreative.com/rocketon.jpg
dotted i said on May. 27 '10
http://www.dottedicreative.com/rocketon.jpg
Basically, I separated the crossbar of the 't' from the top-right swoosh, then straightened the left side of the right vertical stroke of the 'n' where it meets the curl to help imply the stroke is meant to go all the way to the baseline. May or may not help...just thought I'd try. Nice mark, nonetheless.
dotted i said on May. 27 '10
Jaggu said on May. 28 '10
charmy said on May. 30 '10
JF said on May. 30 '10
RossSokolovski said on Jun. 01 '10
VYshouldhavewon said on Jun. 06 '10
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