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nitish.b said on Feb. 09 '10

IMO...the type is embedded on the surface and the mark is on a different dimension...i like it...but somthin is disturbing my eye..dont really know what...but i like the art direction...:)

radhacelis said on Feb. 09 '10

this looks neat, but there's something disturbing my eyes too, maybe is the combination of the glow in the back and the shadow or is the texture in the background.

kathariney said on Feb. 09 '10

i just love the way this one is :)

zephyr said on Feb. 09 '10

Great mark and colours - I would agree that the type could do without the embedded effect.

EBrown said on Feb. 09 '10

Yeah maybe lose the embedded effect to it, and maybe throw it on a solid background or white background. Nice work.

klibia said on Feb. 09 '10

nitish.b, radhacelis, zephyr, EBrown, thank you for feedback! Until you told me, I did'nt see a conflict between the mark and the type. But now my eyes are opened)) You are absolutely right. It's shadow and the embedded effect - they contradict each other considering laws of physics. Something of this should be removed.

kathariney, thanks!))

andreiu said on Feb. 09 '10

pretty cool!

milou said on Feb. 09 '10

mark is very sweet, not sure about size of the type here though.

jonden@ectomachine.com said on Feb. 09 '10

Maybe keep the embed effect on both type and mark and get rid of the color, that's what seems to be throwing it off IMO

klibia said on Feb. 10 '10

Andrei, thanks!
Milou, I spent a lot of time thinking over the type size, and concluded that these proportions are optimal. Probably, you are right, but I can't make it better. Thanks for your comment.
Jonden, thanks! I had the same idea, but I intentionally used color to enforce association with water.
Thanks for all the comments! I tried to consider all given remarks and corrected the logo. Got rid of embed effect, slightly changed background texture, shadow and mark's perspective. Check it out! ))

alexanderspliid said on Feb. 10 '10

This one is great! Though i don't think the type fits the mark, Type is sort'a geometric, and the mark has an oriental feel to it. Some custom script, or just an oriental-inspired font, would do the mark justice imo.

ethereal said on Feb. 10 '10

The type must have been updated because I find this to be pretty nice. Nice mark.

klibia said on Feb. 10 '10

Alexander, ethereal, thanks for your comments! I have to think it over)

Type08 said on Feb. 10 '10

Klibia... This is hot...

klibia said on Feb. 11 '10

Type08, thank you!

firebrand said on Feb. 11 '10

I'd eat there.

milou said on Feb. 11 '10

yup, now it's great , love it.

snowkai said on Feb. 11 '10

Vpolne priyatnii znak, no 4to-to s Z v napisanii*)

Mikeymike said on Feb. 11 '10

reservations for two please!! nice design. solid. congrats!

mattaebersold said on Feb. 11 '10

Really great typeface and wonderful color.

Petro said on Feb. 11 '10

Mistery of the desert... Love this one!

koolklik said on Feb. 12 '10

Is an elegant logo. Color also matching, is extreme

klibia said on Feb. 12 '10

Guys, thank you all for your comments! Very nice to hear such words.
Snowkai, I wanted the type to be modern and at the same time with an eastern motive. I used "Z" to depict this motive, that's why it's so weird and curly ))
Firebrand, Mikeymike, ok, name your order. There are some special items in our menu today ))