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JoePrince said on Jan. 28 '10

This is very nice looking. Think it would look better if the first R were regular, and keep the second R as is.

birofunk said on Jan. 29 '10

Thanks for the suggestion Joe..uploaded a new version, it think your right it works better!

what do you think?

JoePrince said on Jan. 29 '10

Yeah looks a lot better now! Just some minor kerning fixes and you've got a winner :)

birofunk said on Jan. 29 '10

Fixed up kerning and added tagline

tulrich said on Jan. 29 '10

Very elegant. JoePrince was bang-on with his suggestion.

birofunk said on Jan. 30 '10

Thanks Travis, i appreciate the comment!

Type08 said on Jan. 30 '10

Hey buddy, just some thoughts here... I think you're on the right track but I kind of miss the point here - this IS elegant but it could stand for a fashion boutique, private wine collection or purse maker, you know what I am trying to say? If it's for a website that offers luxury cruise options I don't know, maybe it's just me, but I would love to FEEL that in the logo... Now, to get more constructive, you got elements of the waves for example that you might pull out from those both R letters, or in the other hand, what's with the wind and sails, there are few rounded letters that might offer a base for it... I would also downsize the tag line a bit, seems forced going from edge to edge... Hope I didn't offend, it just lacks some 'soul' in it, this should be the logo that should INVITE me to go cruising asap! :)

mcdseven said on Jan. 30 '10

^wow freaky, was just thinking that my self especially with the R the way it curves out under the U... that could be continued so that the rest of the rest sit slightly below a wave... I suppose great minds and all that!

birofunk said on Jan. 31 '10

thanks for the input Alen. I would never take offensive it's very constructive.

I'll reapproach the design tommorow when I have the files. Thanks Paul too

Type08 said on Jan. 31 '10

Great then, I know that you can pull it off!

mcdseven said on Jan. 31 '10

Oops, meant to float this when I replied!

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