The only critique I have is the smoke. It's too detailed for this particular mark. I would simplify it enough so that at a small size it still looks good and stylistically matches the rest of the mark. Good luck.
alexanderspliid said on
Dec. 18 '09
Maybe it's just me, but i feel like the ship is going the wrong way?
mfrank said on
Dec. 18 '09
^I was thinking that too....should the smoke be in the other direction? The left of the boat looks like the front but the smoke is heading in the same direction...... Maybe someone fell off and they are reversing to pick um up...
ethereal said on
Dec. 18 '09
Thanks, guys. Hmm. Well, maybe I would need to check that out. I did this a while back and I forget the type of specific boat the client wanted in there but it's basically a simplified abstract rendition of a photo I found. Flag was at the back, stack in the middle and then a open front end of the boat. I see it as if it's moving into a wave (to the right) with a slight upward motion. I think part of the problem is often boats have a beefier front end but this boat did not, the heavier end was at back. Anyway, thanks a ton guys!
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