Well, it's not exactly Brush Script, but its very similar. The thing that shocks me the most about it is that this actually looks good. My only vote against it would be that it feels like Brush Script, which I have a pre-concocted hatred towards.
I think the gap between the plant and the text is a little uncomfortable i think at a very small scale it would read as a hairline gap which would make it look more like a printing error than a deliberate space.
I think the green of the leaf looks a little murky for a seedling, nit picky i know but may as well nail it.
Oh one more nitpicky thing is that the angle of the bottom text and that of the lowercase stem of the 'p' are at slightly unparallel angles and because you have the bottom text at an angle it suggests that you are trying to make it parellel with it and its slightly off so it feels like a mistake.. it might be mathematically correct but visually it looks a few degrees off.
Nice work.
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KGB said on Mar. 22 '07
ryantoyota said on Mar. 22 '07
Well, it's not exactly Brush Script, but its very similar. The thing that shocks me the most about it is that this actually looks good. My only vote against it would be that it feels like Brush Script, which I have a pre-concocted hatred towards.
kult house said on Mar. 22 '07
kult house said on Mar. 22 '07
raja said on Mar. 22 '07
OcularInk said on Apr. 15 '07
luis castanon said on May. 02 '07
I think the green of the leaf looks a little murky for a seedling, nit picky i know but may as well nail it.
Oh one more nitpicky thing is that the angle of the bottom text and that of the lowercase stem of the 'p' are at slightly unparallel angles and because you have the bottom text at an angle it suggests that you are trying to make it parellel with it and its slightly off so it feels like a mistake.. it might be mathematically correct but visually it looks a few degrees off.
Nice work.
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