The fish detail could be a little more familiar, but overall, nice job. The texture works very well too.
sdijock said on
Nov. 24 '09
I agree about the fish shape - could definitely use some modification. Also, I think the alignment of the type is really odd. IMO it would make more sense start the type with the dot at the bottom center of the circle.
Thanks guys for all your comments!!! Do you mean it the fish should have more detail? Like in the fins, or should I just try a different shapes? They want it to not be recognizable as a specific fish.
I will change the dot to the bottom centre - it was just placed like that as if it was stamped randomly :)
Better at the photo's and paintings :)
This fish fits the circle better. I think it needs some negative space/a break between the right fin and the body of the fish. That area kind of blends together. Hope this helps.
stefani smit said on
Nov. 25 '09
Thanks, yes it does...but the client wants the other fish...will work on that one more...thanks for all the help
OcularInk said on Nov. 24 '09
sdijock said on Nov. 24 '09
logoboom said on Nov. 24 '09
andreiu said on Nov. 24 '09
stefani smit said on Nov. 24 '09
I will change the dot to the bottom centre - it was just placed like that as if it was stamped randomly :)
Better at the photo's and paintings :)
OcularInk said on Nov. 25 '09
stefani smit said on Nov. 25 '09
Logocrave said on Nov. 27 '09
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