I think it's well executed but I'm not sure about the idea... Business Social... they kinda clash with each other... Business isn't really something I consider a Social activity but perhaps that's just my opinion...
Also it feels like it's a Twitter wannabe... trying to imitate an original idea... But that's more about the concept, as I said I like the execution which is very balanced and pleasing. Good work!
Thrasher317 said on
Nov. 12 '09
The success of the twitter logo bird is due to the fact that it's a simple blue bird, therefor you can make it small. The bald eagle is a large bird and trying to simplify and decrease it's size is just not working for me. Right now it's on the border of looking like a decapitated bald eagle head flying through the air. Also, do you really want a bird as it's mascot? Twitter has already established the bird and it's recognizable as such. I would consider strongly that you choose a different animal to differentiate between the two companies.
bobguy said on
Nov. 12 '09
The eagle is neither an icon nor an illustration. It's in between. Be decisive: either blow it out or strip it down.
I would explore ways of meshing 'social' and 'business', since that's the core of your concept.
jonathadapper said on
Nov. 12 '09
Thank you for the critiques. This work is for a school work who we create a kinf of "extension" of the Twitter, but special, because the interface is for business. Because it that i use the same identity of the twitter...
Thanks for the critiques.
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formediable said on Nov. 12 '09
Also it feels like it's a Twitter wannabe... trying to imitate an original idea... But that's more about the concept, as I said I like the execution which is very balanced and pleasing. Good work!
Thrasher317 said on Nov. 12 '09
bobguy said on Nov. 12 '09
I would explore ways of meshing 'social' and 'business', since that's the core of your concept.
jonathadapper said on Nov. 12 '09
Thanks for the critiques.
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