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logomotive said on Nov. 04 '09

Lucky friend. Ditch the outline or reduce some. Big kudos.

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Thank you logomotive, means alot =)
My thought with the outline was a mousepad.. Think it should be reduced?

logomotive said on Nov. 04 '09

Welcome, at least reduce the outline to the same as the type. nice choice of type BTW.

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Update, Thanks again.
Much better.

muse7 said on Nov. 04 '09

I agree ditch the outline, it distracts from the very cool mark/mouse and IMO you really don't need it to identify the mouse.

lundeja said on Nov. 04 '09

Call me crazy, but I like the outline.

pjm said on Nov. 04 '09

This logo changed my life

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

I'll have to upload one without the outline so you guys can see it.
pjm - I'm glad to have made an impact in your life Lol.

logomotive said on Nov. 04 '09

OK after seeing both now and with reduced outline I'm crazy with Jared. This one.

Momentummagazine said on Nov. 04 '09

I like it I guess. The different weight in the H is throwing me off. Maybe I'm not seeing it correctly.

Chad Sanderson said on Nov. 04 '09

C on outside, H on the inside, I think. I definitely agree with Joe though, you may want to increase the weight of the H so it matches the C. It's easily done.

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Thank you much for the criticism. I'll try that out I can definitely see where your coming from with the weight issue now that you mention it.
update soon.

lundeja said on Nov. 04 '09

You know what you could do is make the outline on the right side flat and keep the left side rounded. I think that'd really make the CH pop atcha.

Chad Sanderson said on Nov. 04 '09

^ Another good idea.

lundeja said on Nov. 04 '09

Now that.... IS HOT.

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Updated
Thoughts?
Not sure if this takes away from it or not.

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

heh, very good idea lundeja thank you so much =)

mfrank said on Nov. 04 '09

cool. looks like a mouse and now a smiling face with the right side flat. i like it.

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Thank you frank ! I appreciate it.

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Oh btw, chad.. the outside wasn't meant to be the C but I guess that does work.. If you block out the negative space and look at the mark as a whole (without the outline) it is a C

Hayes Image said on Nov. 04 '09

Definitley better with the above changes made, good work. The mixture of the thin type & the bulkiness of the mouse is a good contrast, as was the decision to keep it B&W. :)

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Thank you very much hayes! I do agree, the changes did help this logo out greatly.
Thanks everyone.

muse7 said on Nov. 04 '09

Hot!

Stephen James said on Nov. 04 '09

Thank you!

eziemac said on Nov. 04 '09

nice work! (i also see a :D face in there!)

fogra said on Nov. 04 '09

His middle name wouldn't be 'Ed' by any chance?

Stephen James said on Nov. 05 '09

No, it is not ed.. Sorry =)

firebrand said on Nov. 05 '09

A vast improvement over the earlier version.

Stephen James said on Nov. 05 '09

Thank you very much firebrand, I agree.

duminda said on Nov. 05 '09

nice!

ICU said on Nov. 05 '09

(R)

rincon said on Nov. 05 '09

clever, simple ellegance, congrat.

!mude said on Nov. 06 '09

Very nice solution.

ahab said on Nov. 06 '09

This is pretty solid. Nice job.

Stephen James said on Nov. 07 '09

Thanks !mude rincon,imude,ahab.. highly appreciated!

pixelauthor said on Nov. 10 '09

Very nice. I love logos with negative space that DOESN'T pop out like this - more sophisticated because you have to make your mind work a bit to see it. Love to see this refining process on here as well. Great work everyone!

ryanlynndesign said on Jan. 14 '10

Great job. I feel like some people might not get that it's a mouse- but once you see it, once kind of has a feeling of accomplishment as if they just solved a little puzzle or something. If that makes any sense.

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