The mark seems too large and the placement isn't quite right. Also, the colors seem off. The yellow looks too orange. And the magenta is too purple. I do like your concept though. :-)
djuice said on
Mar. 03 '07
You're right, the mark is too large, I couldnt make up my mind about the font, thats why i picked a simple sans serif and made it small and then streched the whole thing:) The mark was originaly positioned on the right side beside the S. I tried using the actual CMY but they seemed too light and almost asked for a border around them.
Anyway, thanks for the critique!
I'm not -too- keen the two spacing lines in the symbol. Also, were you not in favor of your original text positioning? I instantly thought on my first glance that the name might appear better placed adjacent to the "S" and under the "P".
OcularInk said on Mar. 03 '07
djuice said on Mar. 03 '07
Anyway, thanks for the critique!
slavingia said on Mar. 03 '07
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