Making it plain and simple, I think the type is too busy comparing with mark. right now they are competing with each other. Glens advice might help that. I would suggest East and Italy being the same and less dramatic typeface and perhaps a smaller "of" in a different face. I think the slight curves of the typeface and serifs are conflicting with the straight lines of the mark.
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