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theartistt said on Jul. 10 '09

at first it is not obvious that is an open mouth. I mean I know it is supposed to be because of the name, but there is an instants confusion at first. I think you should ditch the o altogether and just make it a mouth (add lips is all you have to do). I think that would translate better.
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gyui said on Jul. 10 '09

^agree, the thickness of the "O" throws things off. initially looked like a bat. you can have elements come out of the "O", like the tongue maybe. the 3 dash lines seem either not enough or unnecessary.
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lboi said on Jul. 10 '09

yeah .. i'll work on this one, i had changed the overall weight of the type, but feels off.
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lboi said on Jul. 10 '09

Updated .. this feels much better and has stopped bothering me now ..lol
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knightscreative said on Jul. 10 '09

Very cool! The earlier version took me a minute to recognize the mouth. This one is very clear. :)
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JohnM said on Jul. 10 '09

exactly the kind of font i was thinkin about!!! looks cool sneh! lot of character...
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lboi said on Jul. 10 '09

Thanks JT and John .. yeah it has stopped bugging me now lol.
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Brandsimplicity said on Jul. 10 '09

Yep..this is cool
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theartistt said on Jul. 10 '09

muchos better!
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gyui said on Jul. 10 '09

^Yes! mucho mucho mucho better!
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lboi said on Jul. 11 '09

Thanks guys!! :D
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Tømme said on Jul. 11 '09

congrats!
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lboi said on Jul. 11 '09

Thanks Thomas!
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andreiu said on Jul. 17 '09

this is very cool! :D
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lboi said on Jul. 17 '09

Thanks andreiu!
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tass said on Aug. 01 '09

Nice and clear.
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lboi said on Aug. 04 '09

Thanks tass :-)

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