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pram99 said on Jun. 26 '09

since you are actively looking for critiques, i feel compelled to comment.

i would remove the "reflection" and the drop shadow? is there one? it doesn't really add anything to the mark. i am not sure how literal you are intending the "illustration" element of the guy(?) holding up the barbell, but since it is bent it suggests a sort of lack of stability and kind of flimsiness. is there a reason for the bent aspect of the barbell?

i'd wonder how this would work in black and white.
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thiago.calza said on Jun. 27 '09

Thanks fot the critique.

The reason for the bent barbell is that i thought a regular babell would not be so atractive. So a put it in a perspective.

thanks!
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