I would space the lines equally and thin them up so that you can see more of the snail. It's hard to tell at first glance what it is. Another idea, instead of using many lines to chop him, try using only one line through the middle and make this line match the slant of your type. Try putting a little space between the two 'p's to emphasize being chopped. Not a ton of space, just enough to see. Good luck!
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MomentumMagazine said on Jun. 17 '09
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