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firebrand said on Jun. 14 '09

Nice aboriginal style but the type doesn't seem to fit.

gyui said on Jun. 14 '09

^agree with firebrand, also in the neck area i would add a dot or two to help eliminate or reduce the white space.

dimARTirosov said on Jun. 14 '09

Completely agree with both Roy and George.

forfun said on Jun. 14 '09

HAVE SOME CHANGES.THANK YOU GUYS^_^

chez-boo said on Jun. 14 '09

Nice logos you made! Very fresh ideas.
(I like the donkey in your portfolio - cute ;))

logoboom said on Jun. 14 '09

yep...great mark...bad typo

forfun said on Jun. 14 '09

Thank you,chez-boo.
logoboom ,can you give me a good typo? Feel grateful...

OcularInk said on Jun. 15 '09

Great mark indeed. The type is off though as the others have mentioned. Perhaps something more hand rendered? Pay close attention to the curves and weight of the mark and create a type solution that matches. Good luck! :-)

forfun said on Jun. 15 '09

Thanks for your advice!
Some new changes on the type.

OcularInk said on Jun. 15 '09

You're on the right track now. :-)

gyui said on Jun. 15 '09

I read it now as CMCU, but yo uare on the right path. I'm still wondering about the white space between his neck and body, 2 dots will help eliminate that.

forfun said on Jun. 15 '09

Change again.Read it now?
GYUI,you are right!It's need a dot .I can't understand your idea at first,because I'm a bad boy when I study English:-)
Thank you!