I see the N and V, but the first form brings to mind an A.
I can see you want to keep it abstract and graph style. I think the bar of the T needs to extend rightward (by some measure, small or large) to make sense of the letter. Consider making the T a swash cap which interacts with the next letters or the whole block.
@chargingarc: thanks for the input. interesting take. i am intending the T and V to be lowercase. swash cap huh? hmmm. the thing about this treatment is there are rigid visual rules. i may have to cheat them to make it work though.
grahammond said on
May. 26 '09
I, on the other hand, had a hard time recognizing the V. It's sectioned and detached from the rest of the mark which looks confusing. I'd like to see a thin stroke connecting it as you have done between the characters.
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pram99 said on May. 25 '09
chargingarc said on May. 26 '09
I can see you want to keep it abstract and graph style. I think the bar of the T needs to extend rightward (by some measure, small or large) to make sense of the letter. Consider making the T a swash cap which interacts with the next letters or the whole block.
pram99 said on May. 26 '09
grahammond said on May. 26 '09
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