OH yeah and besides that was not sitting well with me. This IS I'm stoked!!! and feeling good with this one.Thanks for your vote of approval guys. =) I'm a happy camper today.
it is good as is, but I might suggest simplifying it further by taking out the middle horizontal line. extend the left two vertical line up through the roof and leave the rest as is. just curious to see if it would still look like a train.
For a 2c version the middle three squares could be coloured up the same as the smoke. How about a font like Neo Sans for this, Mike? Sorry to keep poking my nose in but I can't get enough of this logo.
Ha lottsa puns! Thanks guys.
Roy I don't want to lose the track aspect. I'm close but consider all suggestions, except adding duck. ;-P
struve said on
May. 20 '09
this is really great! i like it a lot. is perfect as is, one thing you could play with if you wanted to would be to somehow size the type so the o's read as the wheels of the train?? i don't even know if that would be possible because the front end of your name is more 'O' heavy than the end, so it might look unbalanced....but seriously this is really awesome. nice job!
Awe, look at you, bud...all grown up. The mark looks fantastic! Need a little more custom action on the type though. That's like one of your trademarks. Nothin' too crazy, but...ah, who am I kidding? You know what you're doing!
Thanks for all the positive comments guys. Now that I have my mark i have been excited to get my site finished. I posted for opinions in the forum here http://logopond.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=3177 Thanks again guys.
Wow I like this one the best out of all of them. Clean, recognizable, and simple. I would say that you definitely have a winner here. Nice design Mike!
Thanks guys. I would like to add my thoughts without sounding arrogant, considering I do not blog or redirect people to my site, and only doing this to help younger designers and any that will have an ear. This was a fine case of of the most extreme measures taken to achieve the final results. If I make the circles too round I lose the train tracks. If I make it too square I loose the wheels. The subtle touches here should be closely observed. It's the fine detail in design that can make or break a logo. This was by far my toughest project yet my most satisfying one to date.
I'm surprised nobody has suggested this yet: Flip the train horizontally so it's facing left.
The benefit is that now when the logo is rotated clockwise, the train becomes a letter "L". Perhaps the train is already supposed to be an "L" with a short stem? Either way it's a nice logo.
I don't mean to burst your bubble, but to be honest I didn't see the train until I read the comments but after seeing it it was one of those aha moments... I like that in a logo. You should be proud :) Look forward to your new website too!
Arriving very late to this discussion ... This mark is perfect just as it is. Don't make the thought bubbles, this here as it is, is perfect! Saw the train and everything right away ... saw the tracks too. The type is nice and strong, a little play on the words "Logo" and "Motive" [difference in font weights] could just nail it and set it in stone I reckon :-)
muy bien, ya era hora de una renovacion, felicidades! buen rediseño, good work!
mcdseven said on
May. 24 '09
really strong mark, would almost definitely leave a lasting impression, and if you are happy with it, thats even better, I've struggled with mine for such a long time I thinking of renaming myself 'the man with no name/logo'. Well done, another logo success to add to your impressive portfolio.
Thanks guys, I've actually been using this new logo on some of my proposals and questionnaires.I'm liking it a LOT. It even has hints of hole punch outs like the conductors use when validating your ticket.
I beg you to do us all a favor and update your gravatar icon to your new logo, please oh please?
It has always made me cringe seeing that duck icon out to the side of a talented designer with the name 'logomotive'. it'd be hugely refreshing to see a fitting (not to mention, exceptional) logo from now on when I see your comments ;)
Thanks Darrel,albyantoniazzi and thanksPaul, will do ASAP.
LOL at the Fake logo upload thing. Are you kidding me? what a joke. OH this is a REAL LOGO for a REAL client, guess some people will be happy now and feel they are better designers cause they are uploading REAL logos LOL.
By the way I uploaded with "custom" type as per Kevin OCs request. The logo now has some old fashion merged with some modern style. Thanks again guys and keep uploading those inspirational FAKE logos.
This is absolutely great. I am new here and I always wondered why the logomotive guy with such great logo submissions had a random duck logo/avatar. This is a perfect creation for you. Great job.
Thanks Linkcreative, The Duck actually worked for some strange reason. Probably because it was controversial. Why? people remembered the duck. But I am glad I arrived at this mark. It is perfect for me.
Not to go floating my own boat (train) but everyday I find another reason to like my brand even more. That middle space of a train is called the Boiler, the Fire creates steam. So those are Steam bubbles on the inside and smoke or steam (thought bubbles) coming out of stack. :)
Train, train tracks, wheels, smoke, wordplay, abstractism, monogram, and here n there the mark forms all the letters of "LOGOMOTIVE" definitely on the RIGHT TRACK :)
Hey Mike, this is as strong as your showcase, I like it a lot. Visited your site and found that is a bit too out-dated, with the ducky still there? Also i was a bit confused with Jeff Fisher's Logomotives (which I've know for years). Just wonder if you were to register this what would happen.
:)Thanks dbunk.
Thanks mrsunnyz, yeah we have known each other for many years also. If and when I get it registered i would add the ®. I see no prob there.
^ Thanks ThisGuy, where were you the last ten years? Is that a hint of how bad it sucks? yeah I know. I have a great web guy working on it now. I did that in Front page in 98 and have not updated since :) Thanks for the offer and will keep you in mind for future prospects.
dadado said on
Oct. 08 '09
After so many time from the first time I've seen this mark... just can't stop comming up here to see it again! :D
Chad Sanderson said on
Oct. 29 '09
Hey mike! I have an art presentation to do within this next week (College. Good times.) where we have to critically analyze some pieces in an acclaimed graphic designers showcase. Would it be alright if I showed you off to my class? I know it sounds pretty kiddy, but I thought it would be best to ask before gallivanting off on essay topics.
^ I was eating a box of cereal and trying to get through the maze on back of box and could not get through without thinking of you. A Mazing brand bro. ;)
jerron said on
Dec. 24 '09
I thought I would let you know that someone has submitted a "helafant" to Brandstack. http://brandstack.com/logo-design/details/14058
Thanks WKOA.
Thanks so much kman, like I said before this one took me a while and very satisfied with the results, and i find it even more gratifying that it is well liked.
Thanks Michael and Lecart.
Since cats kinda out of bag now,..even though I'm not finished thought I should say Duck is gone now. Still lots of work, so won't be around here much but this is what is going so far. www.logomotive.net
I don't have a clue to what I'm doing as far as technical goes with Blogging and have a lot to learn there. But this is my very first Blog ever. http://www.logomotive.net/blog/ I'm sure it will improve.
alexanderspliid said on
Mar. 17 '10
Beautiful website mike, was about time... It really is great, and i am sure it will attract some great clients.
Thanks guys, I will definitely share.
@Gravitart, Yeah In fact one of my thoughts was to "punch out" the negative space kind of like a conductor punches out your ticket. But decided Just Letterpress the mark and keep it simple.
biebo said on
Jun. 09 '10
i like the concept how the dot matrix become a locomotif.. very nice artwork :D
Thanks Biebo.
For the record I have been accused of copying someone others idea in regards to the name Logomotive. No names mentioned here but what I can say is I was the FIRST "logo designer" with an online presence on the WWW using this name. I did my research prior to this and found NO public records of anything published in print prior to my name and site. SO please do your history before accusing ME of anything like that. I had to get this off my chest.
Didn't know where to start%u2014granted, all your logos are quite exceptional%u2014so I figured commenting on your personal mark's page was only logical. I just wanted to say, I'm a huge fan of your work. Curious to see your process work. Thanks for being awesome!
Thanks Brandsight!
I've been agonizing over my business cards for a while now, just as I did my new identity. Here is one solution I have worked on. http://dribbble.com/shots/199512-Logomotive-Card-1?list=tags&tag=logo
One of my personal 6 best logo designers personal logos. 100% unique, distinct, charismatic, real brand. I like Sean O'Grady/Fogra, Michael Spitz/M, Roy Smith/Firebrand, David Pache/H, Sean/Brandclay, too.
chitrang said on May. 20 '09
firebrand said on May. 20 '09
nido said on May. 20 '09
firebrand said on May. 20 '09
LOGOMOTIVE said on May. 20 '09
LOGOMOTIVE said on May. 20 '09
firebrand said on May. 20 '09
logomotive said on May. 20 '09
oronoz ® said on May. 20 '09
gyui said on May. 20 '09
fogra said on May. 20 '09
firebrand said on May. 20 '09
gyui said on May. 20 '09
oronoz ® said on May. 20 '09
epsilon said on May. 20 '09
logomotive said on May. 20 '09
theartistt said on May. 20 '09
logomotive said on May. 20 '09
smartinup said on May. 20 '09
firebrand said on May. 20 '09
penflare said on May. 20 '09
logomotive said on May. 20 '09
Roy I don't want to lose the track aspect. I'm close but consider all suggestions, except adding duck. ;-P
struve said on May. 20 '09
andreiu said on May. 20 '09
nido said on May. 20 '09
;)
logomotive said on May. 20 '09
epsilon said on May. 20 '09
eziemac said on May. 20 '09
Art Machine said on May. 20 '09
OcularInk said on May. 20 '09
janzabransky said on May. 20 '09
Muamer said on May. 20 '09
logomotive said on May. 20 '09
OC yeah not sure if it will stay but might extra fine tune it. Thanks
Type08 said on May. 20 '09
raja said on May. 20 '09
cerise said on May. 20 '09
rudy hurtado said on May. 20 '09
cseven said on May. 20 '09
cerise said on May. 20 '09
gyui said on May. 20 '09
bartodell said on May. 20 '09
logomotive said on May. 20 '09
epsilon said on May. 20 '09
Kode said on May. 20 '09
hindmarshdesign said on May. 20 '09
patentico said on May. 21 '09
awesome man, just awesome.
Yglo said on May. 21 '09
logoholik said on May. 21 '09
brandsimplicity said on May. 21 '09
Fabianosaurus said on May. 21 '09
danny said on May. 21 '09
long time no speak - looking good this! very memorable icon. i love the duck though :'(
jenlogo said on May. 21 '09
logomotive said on May. 21 '09
logomotive said on May. 21 '09
ClimaxDesigns said on May. 21 '09
terry bogard said on May. 21 '09
logomotive said on May. 21 '09
CD thanks, I awarded myself by designing this =)
JWG said on May. 21 '09
logotivity said on May. 21 '09
MomentumMagazine said on May. 21 '09
logomotive said on May. 21 '09
sandhya said on May. 21 '09
itsgareth said on May. 21 '09
cake_sama said on May. 21 '09
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paul rand said on May. 21 '09
designabot said on May. 21 '09
gold coast website design said on May. 21 '09
dado said on May. 21 '09
straycloud said on May. 21 '09
pabloa said on May. 21 '09
The benefit is that now when the logo is rotated clockwise, the train becomes a letter "L". Perhaps the train is already supposed to be an "L" with a short stem? Either way it's a nice logo.
JustCreativeDesign said on May. 21 '09
ahab said on May. 21 '09
chrisrojo said on May. 21 '09
Siah-Design said on May. 21 '09
jennyb said on May. 21 '09
dwit said on May. 22 '09
tconrad said on May. 22 '09
Talented mark from a talented designer. all the best.
logotivity said on May. 22 '09
lboi said on May. 22 '09
Kudos Mike!
logomotive said on May. 22 '09
demiphonic said on May. 22 '09
sebastiany said on May. 22 '09
joelalexander said on May. 22 '09
lefty said on May. 22 '09
crislabno said on May. 23 '09
typographics said on May. 23 '09
mentelibre1 said on May. 23 '09
mcdseven said on May. 24 '09
logomotive said on May. 25 '09
bigjerk said on May. 26 '09
NOMADESIGN said on May. 26 '09
LoGoBoom said on May. 26 '09
dreamerworx said on May. 28 '09
logomotive said on May. 28 '09
Darrel said on May. 28 '09
albyantoniazzi said on May. 29 '09
onesummer said on May. 29 '09
I beg you to do us all a favor and update your gravatar icon to your new logo, please oh please?
It has always made me cringe seeing that duck icon out to the side of a talented designer with the name 'logomotive'. it'd be hugely refreshing to see a fitting (not to mention, exceptional) logo from now on when I see your comments ;)
logomotive said on May. 29 '09
LOL at the Fake logo upload thing. Are you kidding me? what a joke. OH this is a REAL LOGO for a REAL client, guess some people will be happy now and feel they are better designers cause they are uploading REAL logos LOL.
By the way I uploaded with "custom" type as per Kevin OCs request. The logo now has some old fashion merged with some modern style. Thanks again guys and keep uploading those inspirational FAKE logos.
Tømme said on May. 31 '09
logomotive said on May. 31 '09
epsilon said on May. 31 '09
logomotive said on May. 31 '09
onesummer said on May. 31 '09
wannabe said on Jun. 02 '09
logomotive said on Jun. 06 '09
LinkCreative said on Jun. 12 '09
logomotive said on Jun. 25 '09
AlexWende said on Jun. 26 '09
logomotive said on Jun. 26 '09
logomotive said on Jul. 06 '09
firebrand said on Jul. 06 '09
< Even at favicon size it works brilliantly. Umm I wonder what can I do with my initials in black and white?...
logomotive said on Jul. 06 '09
firebrand said on Jul. 06 '09
nido said on Jul. 06 '09
firebrand said on Jul. 06 '09
Ethanol_ColdFlame said on Jul. 09 '09
logomotive said on Aug. 05 '09
dbunk said on Aug. 06 '09
mrsunnyz said on Sep. 18 '09
logomotive said on Sep. 18 '09
Thanks mrsunnyz, yeah we have known each other for many years also. If and when I get it registered i would add the ®. I see no prob there.
logomotive said on Sep. 25 '09
dadado said on Oct. 08 '09
Chad Sanderson said on Oct. 29 '09
logomotive said on Oct. 29 '09
@dadado, Thanks keep coming back anytime ;)
@ Chad, I'd be honored and thanks for asking.
raja said on Nov. 05 '09
logomotive said on Nov. 14 '09
jerron said on Dec. 24 '09
logomotive said on Dec. 24 '09
fourplus said on Jan. 27 '10
personal logo!
logomotive said on Jan. 27 '10
vinecreative said on Jan. 31 '10
ryanlynndesign said on Feb. 02 '10
Thrasher317 said on Feb. 02 '10
logoboom said on Feb. 02 '10
logomotive said on Feb. 02 '10
johndesign7 said on Feb. 03 '10
creative
logomotive said on Feb. 07 '10
WKOA said on Feb. 09 '10
kman said on Feb. 17 '10
logomotive said on Feb. 24 '10
Thanks so much kman, like I said before this one took me a while and very satisfied with the results, and i find it even more gratifying that it is well liked.
michaelspitz said on Feb. 24 '10
Lecart said on Feb. 24 '10
logomotive said on Mar. 01 '10
Since cats kinda out of bag now,..even though I'm not finished thought I should say Duck is gone now. Still lots of work, so won't be around here much but this is what is going so far. www.logomotive.net
Type08 said on Mar. 01 '10
logomotive said on Mar. 01 '10
Hayes Image said on Mar. 01 '10
epsilon said on Mar. 01 '10
logomotive said on Mar. 01 '10
mcdseven said on Mar. 02 '10
logomotive said on Mar. 02 '10
logomotive said on Mar. 16 '10
alexanderspliid said on Mar. 17 '10
eziemac said on Mar. 17 '10
logomotive said on Mar. 18 '10
vld said on Mar. 18 '10
andre-files said on Mar. 26 '10
alterego said on Mar. 26 '10
ACME-DESIGN said on Apr. 03 '10
logomotive said on Apr. 27 '10
michaelspitz said on Apr. 27 '10
OcularInk said on Apr. 27 '10
epsilon said on Apr. 27 '10
What are you making? What stock did you pick? Common, dude, tell the juicy bits...
gravitart said on Apr. 27 '10
mcdseven said on Apr. 27 '10
logomotive said on Apr. 27 '10
@Gravitart, Yeah In fact one of my thoughts was to "punch out" the negative space kind of like a conductor punches out your ticket. But decided Just Letterpress the mark and keep it simple.
biebo said on Jun. 09 '10
logomotive said on Jun. 17 '10
For the record I have been accused of copying someone others idea in regards to the name Logomotive. No names mentioned here but what I can say is I was the FIRST "logo designer" with an online presence on the WWW using this name. I did my research prior to this and found NO public records of anything published in print prior to my name and site. SO please do your history before accusing ME of anything like that. I had to get this off my chest.
logomotive said on Jun. 17 '10
awaqenin said on Jul. 25 '10
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karmakazi said on Apr. 11 '11
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brandinsight said on May. 19 '11
logomotive said on Jun. 25 '11
I've been agonizing over my business cards for a while now, just as I did my new identity. Here is one solution I have worked on. http://dribbble.com/shots/199512-Logomotive-Card-1?list=tags&tag=logo
logomotive said on Jun. 25 '11
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Ivaylo Nedkov said on Nov. 14 '11
Big fan of your work!:)
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