I would take a bit of the detail from the head and make it flow into the neck better. the tic behind the nose should go and the ear scale under the horn should go to let the head attach to the neck. the font is not flowing with the dragon well at all. the font is to techie/futuristic in comparison to the old world feel of the dragon.
lalohead said on
Mar. 25 '09
theartist, tks for your suggestions, im going to upload another version of this work, i think you are right about the font, and the flow of the neck.
Yep. Nice. Few nitpicks: it feels that mark and type are clashing - going opposite way - maybe put mark to the right? Also, something is bothering me with proportions/layout between mark and type - it feels unstable. Cheers!
He he, I was just about to comment on the mark facing away from the text and saw logoholik's comment. Have you tried placing the mark on the right of the text?
Otherwise, I like it (am a bit of a sucker for dragons).
lalohead said on
May. 27 '09
updated! i think it's working better this way, thanks for the feedback!
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theartistt said on Mar. 25 '09
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lundeja said on Mar. 25 '09
Oronoz ® said on Mar. 25 '09
lalohead said on Mar. 26 '09
theartistt said on Mar. 26 '09
Oronoz ® said on Mar. 26 '09
lalohead said on Mar. 26 '09
logoboom said on Mar. 26 '09
lundeja said on Mar. 26 '09
lalohead said on Mar. 27 '09
firebrand said on Mar. 30 '09
lalohead said on Mar. 30 '09
logoholik said on Mar. 30 '09
cseven said on Apr. 30 '09
Otherwise, I like it (am a bit of a sucker for dragons).
lalohead said on May. 27 '09
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