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muse7 said on Aug. 12 '09

Nocturn, Because you lost the bat. The font is nice and the mark is sweet. IMO you are working to hard to make this one entity. The fix: simplify - center bat above nocturn and you keep the essence of the mark everyone loves and the readability of nocturn. That was easy - challenge me. :P
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tass said on Aug. 12 '09

Well i was thinking about that at my first sketches, but i didn't like the result from what i remember, maybe i'll give it a second try, thanks for your advice Ashley!
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BrunoDF said on Aug. 24 '10

Yeah...I agree with muse7...you should give it another try...

You have a very piece of typography there! Really like it, and the bat is so cool...

Try to put de Bat above the typography and match the sizes...IMO that will get it done.

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