I like the typeface and colors.
Just minor details.
If the name is going to be that close in size, it should be equal in width.
The stem and leaves are over powering.
Try bringing the "l" back down to normal height, kern the letters slightly tighter and shrink the leaves about 70%.
Her titles are not resolved, try using a condensed sans serif so it tucks in nicely not passing the s.
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Paul Rand said on Mar. 19 '09
Just minor details.
If the name is going to be that close in size, it should be equal in width.
The stem and leaves are over powering.
Try bringing the "l" back down to normal height, kern the letters slightly tighter and shrink the leaves about 70%.
Her titles are not resolved, try using a condensed sans serif so it tucks in nicely not passing the s.
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