I really like this. I can see how you have to have the B mark so large because of the detail, but it is too much for text below. I don't like the fancy ampersand, either, and the open space around it does not match the open space between BACK and ROADS. Reads as BACK then ROADS&BEACHES. Shrink the main mark 75%, find a more consistent ampersand for the text below, fix the spacing between words and reupload. I floated this because the changes I suggest don't change your concept or the execution of the main mark. I really love it.
Thank you. Unfortunately for the changes you suggested it's too late. But I can see logic and merit in exactly what you said. You insights & time are very much appreciated.
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theartistt said on Mar. 10 '09
rdqlus said on Mar. 20 '09
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