I really like the colors and mark but why is it a bird? Is there something I'm not seeing? Also the placement of the colors should be more evenly placed to the tip ofthe wing, and some of the stripes jut out more than others.
gyui said on
Mar. 05 '09
penflare, is it suppose to be a toucan? if it is, isn't the beak suppose to have the color.
itsgareth said on
Mar. 05 '09
Great idea, though for it to be recognisable as a Toucan, the beak needs to be way more pronounced. Don't exactly need colour imo. Have a quick look on google images bud...
that's what my thought is, if you make the beak almost obnoxiously big, make it flow smoothly in to the head, and simulate the tip of the paint brush like nido mentioned, the toucan would show through much stronger.
it's a really nice concept penflare, but for a toucan i think it's all in the beak.
fogra said on
Mar. 05 '09
Nice idea, Sean. It reminds me of the old Guinness toucan posters - google it to find out. The beak does need a tweak though like Gareth just said.
mesa designs said on
Mar. 05 '09
Oh wow now I understand why it's a bird lol. I didn't recognize it as a toucan at all. The beak still needs work though. I agree with what gyui and gareth said though, put the color in the beak.
Agreed. I think the changes have only strengthened the brand. My only comment would be that I think the green strip in the beak should be black. This would make the beak colours CMYK and a perfect logo for a printing house/firm.
Really enjoyed seeing your development on this one. Great job, Sean. Now, re-upload on Incspring and up your price already. The world will never know what logo design is really worth if you and others keep selling yourselves short. You're designs are worth more. :-D
alterego said on
Mar. 06 '09
plzzzz... don't do this kind of stuffs am getting envy with with u :)
Art Machine said on Mar. 05 '09
mesa designs said on Mar. 05 '09
gyui said on Mar. 05 '09
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nido said on Mar. 05 '09
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firebrand said on Mar. 05 '09
penflare said on Mar. 05 '09
itsgareth said on Mar. 05 '09
itsgareth said on Mar. 05 '09
penflare said on Mar. 05 '09
gyui said on Mar. 05 '09
it's a really nice concept penflare, but for a toucan i think it's all in the beak.
fogra said on Mar. 05 '09
mesa designs said on Mar. 05 '09
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AlexWende said on Mar. 06 '09
Which font do u used?
Brandsimplicity said on Mar. 06 '09
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penflare said on Mar. 06 '09
@alex - bree bold was used
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