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matt.h said on Mar. 03 '09

Great idea!

Paul Rand said on Mar. 08 '09

Try a different font.
The sleepy eye concept can be pulled off without flipping them.
filmworks doesn't sit right, like an afterthought.

logomotive said on Mar. 08 '09

^ I think that Paul "Loyd" Rand is talking in his sleep.
Maybe you should at least post some work before telling people what to do.

theartistt said on Mar. 09 '09

I agree. although I don't agree with everything he says, he does seem to know his stuff. has anyone seen Toni lately?

theartistt said on Mar. 09 '09

filmworks should be centered underneath, but the rest is perfect.

dbunk said on Mar. 10 '09

Micha! Gotcha....?!? with those sleepyeyes :)

Tømme said on Apr. 27 '09

like it!

tconrad said on Apr. 27 '09

Nice eye-dea (sorry bad pun). I don't mind the font at all I think it fits, the placement of the filmworks doesn't bother me either. The 'Fi L' ascenders nestle nicely into the negative space of 'ye' and the 'k' fits well at the end of 'eyes'.

I do think the eyes seem a bit more 'indifferent' than sleepy. I do see how the 'e' right side up might make for nice bags under the eyes. Either way, I like what you've got. Kudos!

logotomy said on Apr. 27 '09

Nice, Actually, I agree with tconrad about the nice bags under the eyes when the e are flipped back to normal.

teeps said on Apr. 27 '09

Great, I like this as you've presented.... you've rotated the "e" upside down... which is giving a sleepy feel

Mitch said on Apr. 28 '09

I agree that the eyes don't need to be rotated, just reflected. This could then be used to play on the bags under the eyes.

And yes the strap is awkwardly set at the moment, but don't feel centering it would help the situation.

theartistt said on Apr. 28 '09

The more I look at this, the more I don't think it should change. It grows on you in a good way.

ClimaxDesigns said on Apr. 28 '09

i think we need to slow down here as this logo is not green flagged so the criticism isn't really warranted and the e's are presented as the designer wanted them to so the second guess that makes not sense they look fine the way they are.

also the name of the logo is sleepy eyes not morning eyes which bags under the eyes would more be a reference to. one is at night the other is in the morning, one is a kin to going to sleep the other is waking up.

nilly said on Apr. 28 '09

excellent logo, I love the font

michal said on Apr. 28 '09

Climax, it's always good to hear some criticism :)
In most cases designer has to make decissions about design by himself.
I think that there is always some way to create something better and all you can do is to learn on your mistakes.

rambal said on Apr. 28 '09

except the font, the mark stands out only because of the concept.
Nice concept.

tconrad said on Apr. 30 '09

I'm curious where it says baggy eyes is specifically a morning thing? I always thought there to be more general association to sleepiness or lack of sleep. I'm no MD though.

tconrad said on Apr. 30 '09

ps. since when did not having a green flag stop people from critiquing/commenting?

can't he just not scroll down the page?

gold coast website design said on Apr. 30 '09

Not bad. On it's own it's good but compared to the level of creativity on this site it's a bit lame.

sleepyeyes said on May. 02 '09

nice font choice and look but the eyes just don't look sleepy enough for my liking. May it's the straight across of the "eyelids" that says annoyed or angry to me more than sleepy. Mentally i associate more of a downward curve with sleepy

on a similar note it's kinda sad to see someone else making use of my name, oh well, such is life

snowkai said on May. 04 '09

love it!

19930921 said on May. 04 '09

Hello michal

I have featured your logo on my websites feature called 'Hot or Not'
Each month i give my opinions on the Featured logo's on Logopond.

http://www.thegraphicshack.com/?p=275

Thank you.
Adam @ http://www.TheGraphicShack.com

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