the photoshop effects do not help.
it's the design that needs work.
Contrast is good, as Paul Rand says "without contrast you're dead"
The idea of the moon being out of the moon and set inside is fine.
I would say that the font being all 90 degree angles and a circle lacks
a look of being designed. The circle being in black does not project as a moon. Try some other versions that are more stylized, even in a grunge design. Push it further.
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Paul Rand said on Mar. 07 '09
it's the design that needs work.
Contrast is good, as Paul Rand says "without contrast you're dead"
The idea of the moon being out of the moon and set inside is fine.
I would say that the font being all 90 degree angles and a circle lacks
a look of being designed. The circle being in black does not project as a moon. Try some other versions that are more stylized, even in a grunge design. Push it further.
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