Cheers Epsilon, It was semi-custom... I widened and thickened a Times Sans Serif font. Also the "C" I made more circular and moon like! :)
renalicious said on
Feb. 19 '09
The tight letterspacing makes your eye go right to that big gap around the 'A' - maybe you could remove the left stem of the 'A' and connect it to the 'H'?
I actually like the fish quite a bit. You need to widen the bowl or lobes on the C,D,R,B they are always slightly wider than the other vertical strokes or widths, especially the C,They look a little thin to me and I agree with the spacing issues. I like it so far though.
renalicious said on
Feb. 19 '09
I would also say widen the gaps slightly on the fins and tail. It will make it more durable when reproducing it on under difficult printing conditions.
Mason Roberts said on
Feb. 19 '09
Thanks a lot for the crits guys! :) I'll work on the spacing and width issues as soon as I get some free time!
@ Logomotive: Glad you like the fish! I am his biggest fan! :P
Mason Roberts said on
Feb. 19 '09
@ renalicious: Cheers mate, I'll work on that too! :)
Mason Roberts said on Feb. 19 '09
epsilon said on Feb. 19 '09
Mason Roberts said on Feb. 19 '09
renalicious said on Feb. 19 '09
logomotive said on Feb. 19 '09
renalicious said on Feb. 19 '09
Mason Roberts said on Feb. 19 '09
@ Logomotive: Glad you like the fish! I am his biggest fan! :P
Mason Roberts said on Feb. 19 '09
eziemac said on Feb. 20 '09
I'm liking the fish, mate, i'm his number 2 fan. ;D
Mason Roberts said on Feb. 20 '09
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