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Imani_Lateef said on Dec. 06 '08

comments. suggestions.
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sdijock said on Dec. 07 '08

Unfortunately, it reads as "NEWL" "FE", which is obviously not what you had intended. You may want to consider using a slightly lighter (thinner) weight for the word "LIFE" and then make your star significantly larger and/or longer so that the thicker part of it matches the weight of the type more closely.
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THEArtistT said on Dec. 07 '08

One thing to add to sdijock is to put the original "I" back in just to adjust the kerning then remove it. There is too much space around the down point of the star which removes it even more from representing the "I" in LIFE. And, just a thought, I would move PRODUCTIONS over so that the tip of the down point takes the place of the "I" in PRODUCTIONS as well. Should help reinforce what the star represents.
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Imani_Lateef said on Dec. 08 '08

thanks for all the feed back. I'll post a revised version

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