wow that is one messed up definition. Interesting, but messed up. I don't know that I would want that as the name if that story is used to describe it. Now to the logo... as I said on your other logo you need to work on your lines. From what I can see from this low res version there are many places where your curves are not smooth, it just need to be finessed. As for the font and the mark together (this is just my opinion) but they do not work together at all. They are in direct contrast to one another. you have a very fluid organic shape and somewhat tech looking fonts. Personally I like what you did for "CAMORBO", but I'd loose the highlight split. I'd also loose the tracking/kerning on "interactive". Take my comments with a grain of salt, this is just my opinion, I'm not trying to be a dick.
azhaan said on
Feb. 13 '11
my dear werthless thank you very much for your detailed review and comments. :) i will improve my work and try to upload the newer version very soon
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werthless said on Nov. 19 '08
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