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epsilon said on Nov. 02 '08

Looks groovesharky to me
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penflare said on Nov. 02 '08

@epsilon.. why because it has a wave?..

lol- it looks great, great concept, great job

cheers
sean
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revolvedesign said on Nov. 02 '08

nice design, only thing I think you should work on is the type... sound is fine but ocean is just a bit too thin. I just think there's a bit too much contrast between the words, not to say you weren't for that though :D
IMO it distracts from the mark.
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diez said on Nov. 02 '08

thanks for ur advices, revolvedesign u have reason about the tipography of ocean, its too light compared to "sound", it was a calm ocean ;)
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epsilon said on Nov. 02 '08

@penflare - I guess the general shape and the composition of the mark and its color treatment.

The sound waves look like they need more work. They neither match the curvature of the enclosure nor any part of the wave. The wave itself comprises of two different curves, so the mark as a whole lacks cohesion.

Also I agree with revolvedesign regarding Ocean being to thin and making the text appear unbalanced.
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revolvedesign said on Nov. 02 '08

just needs some refinement
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Lawrence Anderson said on Nov. 05 '08

Cool concept. I agree that the inner sounce curves should match the outter circle/o curves.

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