the type is a little faint. if you are putting it on a black background, why not knockout the type?
The crown is somewhat hard to see, I wouldn't have known it was a crown unless I read your description.
Hayes Image said on
Oct. 27 '08
Cheers George :) Yeah I was a little concerned about that, all of the screens & prints I've checked have been fine...just wanted to make sure. The type treatment is a work in progress, but their only 'hang-up' was to keep it dark.
I really wanted to keep the crown form a little ambiguous so it can allow the viewer to visualise other forms :)
I'm not sure I like the combination of four pointed stars with the circles. maybe change out some of the top circles to stars? I would make them all circles or all stars myself. if you increased the text just a little, that would make it easier to read. or a bit lighter of a gray tone would do the same. I understand them wanting to keep it dark.
Hayes Image said on
Mar. 03 '09
Thanks for the comments!!
Yeah type treatment was a challenge on this one, I would've preferred a little more breathing room in the kerning...but, this is what they signed off on.
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Hayes Image said on Oct. 27 '08
Does the type show up o.k on everyone's screen?
gyui said on Oct. 27 '08
The crown is somewhat hard to see, I wouldn't have known it was a crown unless I read your description.
Hayes Image said on Oct. 27 '08
I really wanted to keep the crown form a little ambiguous so it can allow the viewer to visualise other forms :)
THEArtistT said on Feb. 26 '09
Hayes Image said on Mar. 03 '09
Yeah type treatment was a challenge on this one, I would've preferred a little more breathing room in the kerning...but, this is what they signed off on.
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