the mark is very nice. the type seems a bit cramped compared to the free-spiritedness of the bird. Track the type out a bit and soften the blue of the type and you have something really nice here.
ndmgfx said on
Oct. 24 '08
thx guys for the comments ill try something out for the font,
gyui said on
Oct. 24 '08
I really like it a lot, but the white glow is really washing out your beautiful mark. Maybe soften it up?
the word 'bird' falls away too much because of the color. use a bit stronger green from the bird image. take out the white spot in the bird image. that white in the gradient takes overshadows the great shapes.
Type08 said on Oct. 24 '08
KGB said on Oct. 24 '08
ndmgfx said on Oct. 24 '08
gyui said on Oct. 24 '08
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