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ndmgfx said on Oct. 22 '08

the concept is very nice but IMO if you work on the last line on top of the tree this will become perfect

penflare said on Oct. 22 '08

hmm, i'll definitely take your advice, thanks nd

bpotstra said on Oct. 22 '08

Yeah, I'd agree with ndmgfx's comment, and add my 2¢ to it as well... I think if the negative space in between the green 'wave' shapes was consistent (uniform width all the way through the arc), it would work much better. The type also seems a bit too tightly kerned. But all in all, it's a VERY clever mark and you've got some mad skills!

saawan said on Oct. 23 '08

Love the concept. But, the mark stands as a FeedTree instead of a forest! How about adding two more trees on either side so as to make it a forest?

penflare said on Oct. 24 '08

@saawan, i did do a version with multiple trees.. and didnt look nearly as clear as the single tree..

sdijock said on Dec. 30 '08

Clever indeed. Nice work, but fix the curves.

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