Thank you all! Yeah like I said...the client chose this type, not me. I don't like it either. I'll try to persuade them to consider a different type. I'll see what I can do:) Cheers!
I hear you about the typeface issue, the clients are just like that. But as for the logo - it seems a bit busy to me, you can try limit the bottles to 7 instead of 9, and ...make the bottle silhouette to look more like bottle silhouette - smoother, maybe.
jessicacrawford said on
Sep. 19 '08
Lucida Handwriting? Ah, why would the client choose that? It just doesn't work with this logo. It's obviously not your fault though. I hope you can change their mind to something a little more professional. The rest of the design is pure genius though!
Final version but I still have a few issues:
1. The tiny fragments of red points at the top corners of the glass
2. Wine Store is not centered
3. Word spacing after "The" is way too loose
4. The glass stem seems a little off center to the right
@gthobbs- thanks for noticing! I think everything you pointed out needs tweaking. Although this is the final version, I have not sent the final files to the client. Thanks for your detailed evaluation:) I appreciate it. Cheers!
Farmill said on
Sep. 24 '08
Love the new font, what is it?
huyendesigner said on
Sep. 27 '08
love image U design but i think the size of "wine store" is small. If it bigger, may be it better.
ray2008 said on
Sep. 28 '08
that was a pro design i love everything on it thank u
I like it, there is a tiny line under the glass, and I think it would look better if tat wasn't there. Also a sans serif typeface would set if off perfectly (Gotham Bold?)
pixelmaid said on Sep. 18 '08
DROPdesign said on Sep. 18 '08
koodoz said on Sep. 18 '08
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fogra said on Sep. 18 '08
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seppl said on Sep. 19 '08
neogrey said on Sep. 19 '08
jessicacrawford said on Sep. 19 '08
TECHNEO said on Sep. 19 '08
indeed...
but also, clients 'ask' for consessions... unfortunatly.
bigkernel44 said on Sep. 19 '08
webcore said on Sep. 19 '08
I'd present my own version personally. Clients have a tendancy to ruin great design. The mark shines. All this needs is a good basic sans font.
ricecakes said on Sep. 20 '08
mhdesign said on Sep. 21 '08
teletizzle said on Sep. 22 '08
CreationNation said on Sep. 22 '08
nexqunyx said on Sep. 22 '08
gthobbs said on Sep. 22 '08
1. The tiny fragments of red points at the top corners of the glass
2. Wine Store is not centered
3. Word spacing after "The" is way too loose
4. The glass stem seems a little off center to the right
Looks good.
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