The S in the negative space seems a little too big compared to the rest of the type...I think the fish could be reduced a little too so if you just scaled the two of them it might even thing out a bit.
Excellent illustration.
Are gold fish edible?
smartinup said on
Aug. 08 '08
totally ;)
sanjay patil said on
Aug. 11 '08
Well done, I think it is inspired from Serene logo, that was created %u2018s%u2019 using spoon
smartinup said on
Aug. 12 '08
HAHA! My first gallery piece. My day has just been made.
thanks clash, i was wondering the same thing myself.
Sanjay, it was inspired by BIC, it was funny, oc posted that as i was working on mine. but im pretty sure he hacked my computer and ripped my idea.
I opened up your portfolio and said "wow".
This one caught my eye instantly.
The fish illustration is stylized nicely and using them to create the S in the negative space works well. I wanted to lower the top part of the S though, slightly.
The type is clean along with the orange color.
i think the fish are too detailed and the connection to a letter S isnt strong enough for this to be considered successful.
the name implies that it will be used on signage after all, and thus should be readable even out of the corner of one's eye. I also am not crazy about the idea of eating goldfish. That said this is still a great illustration and concept just needs to be solidified and made more clear. in short its a great start to what could be a great logo.
smartinup said on
Apr. 30 '09
all true and fair points grigoriou. thanks for checking my work out, i really do appreciate any feedback.
I love the use of the gold colour here and I think you have captured the movement of the fish perfectly. It could use a little more work to make it clearer that it is a letter S but as this point has already been raised all I can say is very well done.
eeek...when I think of sushi the last fish I want to see is Koi
smartinup said on
Jun. 02 '11
fair enough logoboom, but i would say 95% of all the sushi bars around my area, Koi is the first fish you see as you are walking in the restaurant. But this was always just a fooling around logo anyway, not really for anyone other then practice.
kaimere said on Aug. 08 '08
kriecheque said on Aug. 08 '08
Excellent illustration.
Are gold fish edible?
smartinup said on Aug. 08 '08
sanjay patil said on Aug. 11 '08
smartinup said on Aug. 12 '08
thanks clash, i was wondering the same thing myself.
Sanjay, it was inspired by BIC, it was funny, oc posted that as i was working on mine. but im pretty sure he hacked my computer and ripped my idea.
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Tani EcoD said on Jan. 06 '09
zapfogldorf said on Jan. 08 '09
I think the fish could be the "S"...
Paul Rand said on Mar. 11 '09
This one caught my eye instantly.
The fish illustration is stylized nicely and using them to create the S in the negative space works well. I wanted to lower the top part of the S though, slightly.
The type is clean along with the orange color.
mabu said on Apr. 29 '09
grigoriou said on Apr. 30 '09
the name implies that it will be used on signage after all, and thus should be readable even out of the corner of one's eye. I also am not crazy about the idea of eating goldfish. That said this is still a great illustration and concept just needs to be solidified and made more clear. in short its a great start to what could be a great logo.
smartinup said on Apr. 30 '09
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