I read the 'N' as an 'A' at first. I like your thinking behind the design, but to me, it's not working.
kriecheque said on
Jul. 11 '08
I like this. I read it correctly, its not really that difficult to interpret. "Constructora" seems to hang out too far to the right. It seems like the A should end at the bottom-right point of the W. The shadow under the roof seems unnecesary to me...it would be easier to visualize a roof peak without the shadow
GabrielRO said on
Jul. 11 '08
will remove the shadow and re-place the "constructora"...
GabrielRO said on
Jul. 14 '08
...logo updated. comments?
kunt said on
Jul. 15 '08
typo is pretty mellow mate. But it is true that you have a trap! pretty clear idea but it is not that easy when you see it at once. Ok its not "A" but its hardly "N" certainly. -Maybe- you dont need the whole roof, maybe half of it... maybe :)
rtob. said on
Aug. 07 '08
I like it but that gap makes it a little bothersome. Did you try having a regular N (reduce the R to the size of the rest) and using the red roof on top of the N? It'd all be balanced after that.
yorch said on
Aug. 17 '08
Have you tried keeping the serif at the starting point of the N? Maybe in that way it would look more like an N and less like an A. Just a suggestion, don't know whether it will work.
GabrielRO said on Jul. 11 '08
OcularInk said on Jul. 11 '08
kriecheque said on Jul. 11 '08
GabrielRO said on Jul. 11 '08
GabrielRO said on Jul. 14 '08
kunt said on Jul. 15 '08
rtob. said on Aug. 07 '08
yorch said on Aug. 17 '08
chng! said on Oct. 17 '08
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