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OcularInk said on Jul. 01 '08

It's a clever idea, but a logo with the word 'target' in the wordmark and a red target as the mark is to close to TARGET's brand in my opinion. Just my two cents. ;-)

hardlysquare said on Jul. 01 '08

I appreciate all cents, even if it is just 2 cents. Thanks! The company's name is Write on Target, so I can't really change that. But I see your point, it is right on target. I'm not sure if I should abandon the target symbol all together just because of the store Target? It is the most recognizable symbol for the word target. Anyone have any thoughts?

cerise said on Jul. 01 '08

It is too close to Target's (the store) brand, looks good though

OcularInk said on Jul. 02 '08

I hear ya about the company name. Does the target have to be red?

werthless said on Jul. 03 '08

or even give the target a few more rings and change the color of each ring. Maybe even make each ring out from the center a lighter shade of the previous ring. Make cents?

hardlysquare said on Jul. 03 '08

Thanks Werthless. This suggestion is useful... not worthless. I will try those tips out. Thanks again.

johannesfreund said on Jul. 06 '08

Maybe you should pick another typeface that does better express the "writing".
A serif, or even a script.

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