mate - this is a hot mark! Great type and execution.
just a few personal thoughts though.
1. at first i thought it was a ferret with wings. maybe make more of a dip at the back of the neck? I think phoenix's usually have more of a defined head.
2. The gap between the X and the tail seems slightly too big for me.
3. The tail section to the right of the X could be a little more rounded. it seems a little to square and doesnt flow naturally around.
liquor said on
Jun. 26 '08
@cobatcow.: Thanks for comment mate. They r very useful..i will think about it
paulinhosantana said on Jun. 25 '08
cobaltcow said on Jun. 25 '08
just a few personal thoughts though.
1. at first i thought it was a ferret with wings. maybe make more of a dip at the back of the neck? I think phoenix's usually have more of a defined head.
2. The gap between the X and the tail seems slightly too big for me.
3. The tail section to the right of the X could be a little more rounded. it seems a little to square and doesnt flow naturally around.
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