Too much going on. The little building in the black box gets lost really easily. I might just take it out or find a better way to represent a building, maybe only make small rectangles as windows to suggest the shape. Also, I think you might want to reevaluate your hierarchy in your text. I don't think you need "ap" in there twice.
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smashuri said on May. 14 '08
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