Interesting indeed. In addition to the other "nit-picky" comments, the mouth or chin seems off. He/she doesn't look very passionate. ;-) Or maybe its the chin. Would it look funny if the chin followed the same angle as the nose and forehead? Just a thought. Even so, good job.
Thanks for the comments.
And to you Ocularink... Yes, its true that there is something about the face thats off. I did the logo a few years ago, and if I did it today, it would hopefully look different :-)
it reminds me of gotham city for some reason... maybe the stylistic approach. I like it a lot tho, ya the face is a bit grotesque, but doesn't seem to bother me too much. I might make the website in a lighter type, if you retouch it at all.
it sort of has an art deco feel to it, I like it a lot.
If I was to critique anything on this, I would say the wing feels a little heavy compared to the face. If the top of the wing's lines were the same thickness and the lines got thinner towards the bottom, it might help. Otherwise, beautiful!
gthobbs said on May. 06 '08
ahab said on May. 06 '08
OcularInk said on May. 06 '08
emil hartvig said on May. 06 '08
And to you Ocularink... Yes, its true that there is something about the face thats off. I did the logo a few years ago, and if I did it today, it would hopefully look different :-)
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Respiro said on May. 06 '08
tconrad said on May. 07 '08
chazthetic said on May. 08 '08
If I was to critique anything on this, I would say the wing feels a little heavy compared to the face. If the top of the wing's lines were the same thickness and the lines got thinner towards the bottom, it might help. Otherwise, beautiful!
dariux said on May. 09 '08
hindmarshdesign said on Aug. 14 '08
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