I agree with both comments above, the W and the S are taking away from the beautiful illustration you created. Keep the type simple, don't over design.
If you want to incorporate the type more, maybe try starting the illustration of the leaves at the C of Capital and have it swirl around the W to the bottom of Woodlands, so that the illustration encompasses the type making it a little less conventional.
Completely agree with everyone above. Much better mark than the previous version. Just don't go overboard with the type. Clean and simple is much better. I'd just go all gray text but make sure both lines of text are the same size, as currently they are not.
chanpion said on
Mar. 07 '08
Wow, is that really you dache? must be having a bad day ;^)
Agree with above on the type. Beautiful mark, though!
The only other thing I thought of ... I'm not sure what this is for (not sure what green charity means) but if by 'charity' you need to cut costs, you could probably pick one dark green that tints nicely and get away with one color to save costs on printing, etc.
gthobbs said on Mar. 07 '08
alto said on Mar. 07 '08
djaynoel said on Mar. 07 '08
If you want to incorporate the type more, maybe try starting the illustration of the leaves at the C of Capital and have it swirl around the W to the bottom of Woodlands, so that the illustration encompasses the type making it a little less conventional.
Great mark!
ryantoyota said on Mar. 07 '08
dache said on Mar. 07 '08
jayred said on Mar. 07 '08
chanpion said on Mar. 07 '08
Can't wait to see more of your work Super Hiro!
dache said on Mar. 08 '08
chanpion said on Mar. 08 '08
OcularInk said on Mar. 09 '08
chanpion said on Mar. 09 '08
saawan said on Mar. 09 '08
rfrusso said on Mar. 10 '08
The only other thing I thought of ... I'm not sure what this is for (not sure what green charity means) but if by 'charity' you need to cut costs, you could probably pick one dark green that tints nicely and get away with one color to save costs on printing, etc.
OcularInk said on Mar. 10 '08
Thomas said on Mar. 11 '08
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