I like this one a lot- my only recommendation would be to enlarge the middle parts a bit, so they fill up more of the oval & there isn't quite as much red around it.
I knew this was one of yours, looks like you found a new style (nitch) and have increased your type arsenal. I like the timeless look of your latest designs. Nice and refreshing. Keep up your excellent work.
Mike... Honestly this is scary. I feel like I am being type cast because a lot of people are requesting this look from me. And yes type arsenal has grown quite a bit. :)
About the type... I love it, but I suggest tweaking one e to make it look more handwritten. Normally it wouldn't be so noticeable, except that they're right beside each other. It's the only imperfect thing that I noticed about this logo.
8... I think you could nudge the type to the right just a bit for more visual space, the capital f is cramming it ever so slightly, I know its pixel centered but visually, prob needs a bump.
I would love to receive anything with this logo on it - could also work for a pie or candy company. Exquisite.
drewboy said on
Dec. 03 '07
Bart - really good colour scheme (as usual!) - I see why you have made the 'm' into a stalk, but it now looks too much like an 'h' to me. That plus the 'an' & I read 'Freehand' - but maybe I'm just too old... I agree with Ryan that the 'ee's are too similar. If you make one look slightly different it will be spot on.
amyblandford said on Nov. 30 '07
admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07
logomotive said on Nov. 30 '07
admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07
ryantoyota said on Nov. 30 '07
logomotive said on Nov. 30 '07
ClimaxDesigns said on Nov. 30 '07
logomotive said on Nov. 30 '07
admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07
admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07
firestorm888 said on Dec. 02 '07
drewboy said on Dec. 03 '07
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