Very nice. The type and the mark balance very nicely. My only concern would be the detail required, but then I was able to make out the face from the thumbnail in the main gallery, so I think it's successful.
My only crit would be that the sillo (head) looks very much like a man to me. I think it's the space from the forhead on back that almost gives it a crew cut look. Maybe if the graphic (maroon leaf/hair) on the right cut into the sillo sooner and gradually matched the gold one, it would make it more flowy (like a womens hair) and less masculine.
font looks nice, but the graphic is to hard to understand when it will be used in small sizes. and when used in small sizes at first look it will look as a fire rather than a head with blowing in the wind hair. i would make it look more like hair rather than fire. I also agree with what ahab said that seeing so much of the forhead it looks like a man rather than a woman.
believe said on
Nov. 29 '07
I agree with vld, it feels like "Fire lady" because of the colors and the flame-like design around her face. Perhaps more feminine colors? softer design elements?
andrendhiq said on
Nov. 29 '07
Thanks for feedback every one.
"Fire"? I don't think so. That's "rose flower", and also i try to makes an abstract "F letters". as first letter of finelady.:)
@ chanpion. He he yes, i have see they chosen one. ;D.
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nido said on Nov. 27 '07
firebrand said on Nov. 27 '07
ryantoyota said on Nov. 27 '07
andrendhiq said on Nov. 27 '07
logomotive said on Nov. 27 '07
duschdas said on Nov. 28 '07
vld said on Nov. 28 '07
Tought, it looks more like "FireLady"....
Kwaku said on Nov. 28 '07
komrath said on Nov. 28 '07
chanpion said on Nov. 28 '07
ahab said on Nov. 28 '07
My only crit would be that the sillo (head) looks very much like a man to me. I think it's the space from the forhead on back that almost gives it a crew cut look. Maybe if the graphic (maroon leaf/hair) on the right cut into the sillo sooner and gradually matched the gold one, it would make it more flowy (like a womens hair) and less masculine.
Just a thought/observation.
dustangel said on Nov. 28 '07
believe said on Nov. 29 '07
andrendhiq said on Nov. 29 '07
"Fire"? I don't think so. That's "rose flower", and also i try to makes an abstract "F letters". as first letter of finelady.:)
@ chanpion. He he yes, i have see they chosen one. ;D.
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