Great concept, but the shape seems unpolished to me. I feel like the handle should either be the same thickness as the rest of that line (which is kind of odd that it's thicker than all the other lines), or you could style it to look more like a shopping cart handle. The wheels seem a tad too close, as the gaps would fill in when printed at small sizes. Finally, I don't know if I like the way the bottom of the e finishes so sharply, when everything else is rounded. It feels like it's breaking the style. Nothing major, I just feel it could be cleaned up a little to really shine.
webing said on
Nov. 10 '07
It's a nice icon, congrats! I'd like to see the typeface.
I agree with ryantoyota. While the concept is great and it looks nice, I feel it can be developed further. Some quick polishing would make this perfect. Lets see it with type. :-)
Beklad said on Nov. 10 '07
I LOVE IT!!
nido said on Nov. 10 '07
logomotive said on Nov. 10 '07
firebrand said on Nov. 10 '07
ryantoyota said on Nov. 10 '07
webing said on Nov. 10 '07
admarcbart said on Nov. 10 '07
OcularInk said on Nov. 10 '07
firebrand said on Nov. 10 '07
ScottB said on Nov. 11 '07
rambal said on Nov. 12 '07
Thanks for your valuable comments. I'm working on the mark.
Soon I'll post it for your review.
amyblandford said on Nov. 12 '07
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