I'm assuming that your mark is a fish of some kind...? It's a bit confusing. There's too much space (i.e., leading) between the lines of your type and I also find the typeface you've chosen to be somewhat illegible in general. I'd love to see you refine this more.
saklabalbert said on
Nov. 05 '07
tanks for your comment, i´m working with that.
insomnisdesign said on
Nov. 05 '07
I agree with sdijock about the leading space. Are the bottom part of the fish and 'garden' different shades? These would look good the same shade.. nice work anyway
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sdijock said on Nov. 05 '07
saklabalbert said on Nov. 05 '07
insomnisdesign said on Nov. 05 '07
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