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koodoz said on Oct. 31 '07

I quite like the idea. My only suggestion would be to make the 'fish' slightly more prominent, as it is a clever icon.

teeps said on Oct. 31 '07

I like the type face and I agree with koodoz

dache said on Oct. 31 '07

It has great potential. Clever idea

OcularInk said on Oct. 31 '07

Great solution!!

firebrand said on Oct. 31 '07

The mark is clever. Not sure about the type. Maybe it's the colour?

ryantoyota said on Oct. 31 '07

I love the fish!

graft said on Oct. 31 '07

Very clever. Here's "a little suggestion":http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2875/77946441hu6.jpg, i hope you don't mind.

Respiro said on Nov. 01 '07

Lennon, please allow me a second suggestion: http://www.psdlayout.com/suggestion.jpg

lennon said on Nov. 01 '07

Hi, Thanks for the feed back.

I can't actually make it the fish bigger at this stage although I do see where you are coming from.

As for the colors - black and yellow were the existing corporate colors, so my hands are kinda tied on that.

Graft I really like what you did there but I do need the services on there, also I feel the logo makes less sense without the services on it.

The client has asked to put cross hairs within the target now to hammer home the shooting aspect.

thanks again, much appreciated

ClimaxDesigns said on Nov. 01 '07

cross hairs... so a bullseye doesn't *scream* target enough...

chanpion said on Nov. 01 '07

One of the koolest mark I've seen for awhile. well done!

OcularInk said on Nov. 01 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:
cross hairs... so a bullseye doesn't scream target enough...

Seriously. Nothing more needs to be added to the icon. It's perfect as is!!

ahab said on Nov. 01 '07

Cool mark. I like the suggestion layouts too. Nice feedback.

logomotive said on Nov. 03 '07

Mark is so powerful I would increase the size of it?

logomotive said on Nov. 03 '07

You also might try reversing the fish and writing it Archery,Shooting,Fishing?

koodoz said on Nov. 06 '07

logomotive said:
You also might try reversing the fish and writing it Archery,Shooting,Fishing?

Mike, why do you suggest that?

lennon said on Nov. 07 '07

Thanks for the suggestions guys. I'm afraid bar the crosshairs all has to stay the same.

I'm beginning to think that an increase in the size of the mark would have been nice.

Logomotive - not sure why I'd switch that? The order at the moment reflects each services importance to the business.

logomotive said on Nov. 07 '07

Well it's just my opinion and what I might personally do that's all. We read from left to right and when I create anything with an arrow in it I always try to give positive note as in forward progress and I feel the whole logo should work just like we read. Hey nothing wrong with it, just a personal choice. Again love the mark A LOT!

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