This illustration is really nice, but the type is really bad. Sorry. I'd get rid of the all caps and try a font with a bit more interest since the whale is very simple smooth, curved lines.
I would like to see this in different colors...the green and yellow combined with the shape of the whale remind me of fruit.
I like the illustration though, I think that totally works as well as the plastic effects.
ahab said on
Aug. 01 '07
Great style in the illustration...
Besides all the font feedback. I would suggest the harsh line that you have defining the green in the tale looks awkward to me. Have you tried actually swooping that so maybe it looks like it flows into the large portion of green you have on the body. I think just slightly curve a point to the back side of the whale to where the green disappears behind it and then reappears on the large part of the whales body.
Other than that...COOL!
dikkers said on
Aug. 01 '07
yeah i think it looks really good, but the way the line follows make him looks like ke's be twister or "ringed out"
dikkers said on
Aug. 02 '07
actually, i take that back, not i see it as him swimming up and to his left
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brandberry said on Jul. 09 '07
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XLCowBoy said on Jul. 10 '07
brandberry said on Jul. 10 '07
2 XLCowBoy i think so. it will be good
slightlyshocked said on Jul. 31 '07
OcularInk said on Aug. 01 '07
jwadenpfuhl said on Aug. 01 '07
I like the illustration though, I think that totally works as well as the plastic effects.
ahab said on Aug. 01 '07
Besides all the font feedback. I would suggest the harsh line that you have defining the green in the tale looks awkward to me. Have you tried actually swooping that so maybe it looks like it flows into the large portion of green you have on the body. I think just slightly curve a point to the back side of the whale to where the green disappears behind it and then reappears on the large part of the whales body.
Other than that...COOL!
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