Nothing to change! With such a lengthy name but still manage to balance this out together with a spectacular mark, bravo! Thumbs up in every department for me.
Try make the strokes (mostly by the green area and the beak) all the same size. Id also mirror the windows on the right side. Near the bottom of the birds neck it has a rather dirty curve.
I think this is a great concept and hope you can render it even better.
Fux said on
Jun. 28 '07
I like the logo pretty much, the elements are good arranged and i guess they characterise Santa Cruz really good. But i agree with mokenke that the circles are too heavy. The elements getting smothered by the black shapes, they have not enough space for beeing the essential thing in the mark.
Getting the whole thing a bit lighter would support the nice elements inside and of course the impression of santa cruz as a tourist location where you can relax yourself.
Thanks to all for the opinions, ithelps me to continue forward. Soon estre showing them more. They can see the applications of the logo in www.destinosantacruz.com
Best Regards
firebrand said on
Jun. 28 '07
A unique concept, well done. I'm curious how this would look if you deleted the black background altogether and tightened it up a little.
The bird could borrow one of the neighbouring colours. Nice work.
Hi kurt, thank you for your appraisal. Actually these works were realized for different companies that they needed to introduce the concept of the bird in the logo. You are cordial invited to looking at our other logo and to leave us your commentaries. Cordial regards
Great job, I agree with the people before me. I just don't feel that Times New Roman in place... use other serif, Legacy Serif for example - anything but Times :)
Hi Logomotive
Thank you for your suggestion. Actually the black contour I realize to support a rectangle between the figure and the letter. I expect it has liked to you
Regards from Bolivia
chanpion said on Jun. 27 '07
mokenke said on Jun. 27 '07
dirksierd said on Jun. 28 '07
Good job
ulysses said on Jun. 28 '07
dache said on Jun. 28 '07
I think this is a great concept and hope you can render it even better.
Fux said on Jun. 28 '07
Getting the whole thing a bit lighter would support the nice elements inside and of course the impression of santa cruz as a tourist location where you can relax yourself.
The type is PERFECT.
Kliment said on Jun. 28 '07
senterbrands said on Jun. 28 '07
OcularInk said on Jun. 28 '07
Art Machine said on Jun. 28 '07
ClimaxDesigns said on Jun. 28 '07
josepetit said on Jun. 28 '07
Best Regards
firebrand said on Jun. 28 '07
The bird could borrow one of the neighbouring colours. Nice work.
kult house said on Jun. 28 '07
Boy, you're really a fan of using birds in your logos.
josepetit said on Jun. 28 '07
nido said on Jun. 28 '07
josepetit said on Jun. 28 '07
Cordial Regards
Jeff Fisher LogoMotives said on Jun. 29 '07
josepetit said on Jun. 29 '07
It is an honor to be able to read so good things. Thank you for your good energy.
Cordial regards
efe-zero said on Jul. 03 '07
josepetit said on Jul. 03 '07
Saludos
neogrey said on Jul. 06 '07
josepetit said on Jul. 06 '07
Thank you for your commentary and to contribute your suggestion.
Cordial regards
LOGOMOTIVE said on Jul. 10 '07
josepetit said on Jul. 11 '07
Thank you for your suggestion. Actually the black contour I realize to support a rectangle between the figure and the letter. I expect it has liked to you
Regards from Bolivia
bogglins said on Aug. 12 '07
josepetit said on Aug. 25 '07
lalohead said on Jan. 17 '08
lalohead said on Jan. 17 '08
josepetit said on Jan. 17 '08
Gracias a dios un comentario en español jajajaj.
Un abrazo desde aqui
magicshadow said on Nov. 05 '09
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