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dache said on Jun. 20 '07

Why not just use the the Nicole that is used in the Miller text?

I dont think it looks very pro to have the "by" part. I imagine this perfume? Compare it to something like Dior or . They dont use the by...
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ClimaxDesigns said on Jun. 20 '07

yeah drop the 'by' and center the cursive underneath the nicole in white letting it slighly over lap, that n looks like an h though.

Burn Creative said on Jun. 21 '07



I think it looks fine the way it is.
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kaimere said on Jun. 21 '07

not sure on the by is alll but cool

vinny said on Jun. 22 '07

I think one problem with the 'by' is that visually the bottom line created by that word and the 'nicole miller' create a sloping composition that makes the whole thing look off balance.

I love the typeface and colors, I think with a little tightening up this one will be great.

robertscully said on Jun. 22 '07

I agee that it would look better without the "by" but was done back in 2005 and is in all JC Penny stores

But thank for the feedback it helps for the future projects

-rob
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tini1 said on Sep. 23 '07

i like it...know the brand..it fits well (and have seen in jcpenney, took notice) so, you did a great job;)

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