Hey buddy - couple of things.. for me the x doesnt read as an x (it seems closer to an a). The "P" mark is great but it may be too detailed to reduce clearly.. if this only has to live online at this size you might be okay but I think simplifying it and allowing a little more breathing room between the various toys would help. Just my 2c..
This is still only a proposal and if it is chosen by the client i will certainly consider your criticism. I had already thought about it even; details and legibility specially the X.
Hey buddy,
I'm not sure about the type it looks cool, but my two cents would be to try it in one line and put the tag beneath it. Also the issue is the mentioned x. Then it will be perfect imho. Love the mark & colors, thumbs up.
Cheers.
You have updated the mark also Breno? Or I'm going nuts already?! Type looks better now for sure, I think you could adjust the size of P to the line of the rest and that would be just even more cool I think. Love those mosaic buddy!
Yes Milosz, take a look on dribbble, the previous one have more icons and a bit of 'color dust'; this have less and bigger icons/toys - still working on type.
Thanks Tomme, James and Luiz! I'm glad you like, guys. :)
i think ur type selection might be imperfect or u edited it in wrong way, the 'p' has more visual slop toward letter 'e' bloth are looking same, u have work on 'p'.
Excelente trabalho. Pena ter visto só agora e não ter podido contribuir a tempo, se foi a intenção. Apenas notei que, talvez, a área ao redor das curvas que passam uma por cima da outra no símbolo criando a ilusão de profundidade poderia ser um pouco mais ampla, facilitando, assim, a leitura da forma. Apenas um detalhe na obra excepcional. Parabéns!
Wow, this is quite fantastic. It's obvious you put a lot of work into this. It's colorful, playful, full of energy - seems to meet the mark perfectly. Your client should be extremely happy with this.
Thanks Epicantus and 13mu. Tha client is quite happy with the outcome :)
Jazzoline said on
Jan. 02 '11
Can anyone help me to find tutorial how to create these kind of logos? I mean warping tiny shapes into the big one? There are tons of logos like this and I guess this is not a great secret to share :)
In my case I did not follow any special technique, friend. In any case, I'll post soon the whole process of developing this logo on my Behance portfolio. Then you can check how I got this result. I advance that i say that has no secret. :)
Jazzoline said on
Jan. 02 '11
:)) thank you.. I'll be checking your portfolio :)
I think someone was over inspired by your brilliant work :)
http://creattica.com/logos/dietea/51812
JF said on
Jan. 29 '11
Matto, that's a similar style, not a rip. If you begin to think that way, then all 'parts' logos lined up together would look like they were all ripping each other off, which is not true.
JF said on
Jan. 29 '11
P.S.: Unliver's logo is a 'parts' logo. And, well, actually pre-dates this one I believe. Link here: http://www.farmland.org/images/UnileverLogo.JPG
I'm not saying it's a rip, I just thought the author of that logo was strongly inspired by Breno's work :)
JF said on
Jan. 29 '11
Thanks for explaining, Matto. Usually when someone says 'over-inspired' it is a somewhat polite way to say that they believe someone has ripped off someone else's work. That's all.
deiv said on Oct. 18 '10
bigoodis said on Oct. 18 '10
azdesign said on Oct. 18 '10
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bitencourt said on Oct. 18 '10
Thanks, buddy. Much appreciated your comment.
milou said on Oct. 18 '10
I'm not sure about the type it looks cool, but my two cents would be to try it in one line and put the tag beneath it. Also the issue is the mentioned x. Then it will be perfect imho. Love the mark & colors, thumbs up.
Cheers.
dotflo said on Oct. 19 '10
bitencourt said on Oct. 19 '10
bilebo said on Oct. 19 '10
bitencourt said on Oct. 19 '10
myway999 said on Oct. 19 '10
bitencourt said on Oct. 19 '10
diegomaia said on Oct. 19 '10
but what about increase the "P" eye?
i think is too small if all this toys around...
bitencourt said on Oct. 19 '10
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bitencourt said on Oct. 21 '10
Thanks Tomme, James and Luiz! I'm glad you like, guys. :)
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ALL4LEO said on Oct. 22 '10
How difficult to create such detailed work...
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bitencourt said on Oct. 23 '10
Probably i will work on the new Plexus website :D
Jerron, thanks for your imput; really means a lot for me.
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bitencourt said on Oct. 31 '10
youre great, logoponders :D
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Jazzoline said on Jan. 02 '11
please...
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matto said on Jan. 29 '11
http://creattica.com/logos/dietea/51812
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